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Should sexual education be taught at school?
Sexual education was very discused topic in the near past and considered as really controversial. The primordial idea was to start learning the almost smallest children in elementary school about sexual life, protection, moral, ethical question of this part of life.
But, most of people see behind this plan something manipulative, morbid, so whole idea has never been applied in practise.

As I see it, sexual life is that sensitive topic, that it has to be consultated solely with the closest people, when we are talking about children. Children are very vulnerable and is the most important to not ruin their fragile souls. Child should have opportunity to choose with whom will share his intimity and questions connected with it, or also do not share anything,
if they do not want. On the other hand large part of people would disagree with me, because of the necessity of enlightenment. For instance they would definitely argue, that not every parent has the right approach to their kids and oftentimes do not speak with them that much. Without a doubt they are true, but the danger of possible manipulation from school is much bigger.

For this reason I would never accept this idea. They are many options nowadays for child and also for youth to get informations, answers, which they are searching for, everything is searchable in proper literature, educational programs or completely natural way to ask anyone who they trust, it does not have to be parent.


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Dobrý deň. Nevídím v tom žiadnú chybu :)
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Eva N.
Dobrý deň, text Vám rada upravím. Prosím napíšte mi, ak máte záujem. Ďakujem
Navrhovala by som nasledovne zmeny:-) :
- discussed namiesto discused
- to start teaching (not learning)
- is such a sensitive topic (not that sensitive topic)
- consulted (namiesto consultated)
- not to ruin their fragile souls (not: to not ruin their fragile souls)
- with whom HE/SHE will share his/her intimity
- dať čiarku za: on the other hand,
- does not often speak...(namiesto: oftentimes do not speak with them that much)
- to get information (nie informations)
- completely natural way IS to ask anyone
- sem tam nejaký člen chýba
Zuzana


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Petra L.
Veľmi Vám ďakujem.
Petra L.
Smiem sa ešte spýtať, pasáž: “To start teaching the almost smallest children...” Nemá byť “THE” až pred “SMALLEST”?
Zuzana K.
áno, the pred smallest :-)
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